2019考研英语(二)真题写作解析：高校毕业生去向

考研

　　【题目】
       
        　　48.Directions:
       
        　　Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should
       
        　　1) interpret the chart, and
       
        　　2) give your comments.
       
        　　You should write about 150 words neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
       

        　　【写作思路】
       
        　　首段：图表为柱状图，且有着时间变化。首段需要包含两部分，一部分是总体描述，即此图表是关于“某高校2013-2018年毕业生去向”。第二部分是描述“就业”“升学”及“创业”的数据具体增减情况。
       
        　　第二段：需要阐述导致这个现象的原因，可以从两方面进行阐述。一个是随着社会的快速发展，人们对教育越来越重视，所以越来越多的人选择继续深造。另外一个原因是社会中竞争压力大，学生们自觉自己能力还不足，没有选择立即就业。
       
        　　尾段：进行总结以及展望。总结出图表反应的趋势是可接受的，因此公众不需要为此感到焦虑。另外，学生们需要在读研期间努力学习，才能在未来找个心仪的工作。
       
        　　【可用句型】
       
        　　开头(2种)：
       
        　　1 This bar chart depicts sth. According to the data given above, the percentage of A has decreased from 数字1 to 数字2 while the percentage of B increased from 数字3 to 数字4. By contrast, the change of the percentage of C is not obvious.
       
        　　2 The above diagram provides a series of impressive data regarding sth. In line with the statistics in the graph, between 年份1 and 年份2 , the percentage of A has been on a sharp rise from 数字1 in 年份1 to 数字2 in 年份2, meanwhile, with the percentage of B dropping obviously from 数字3 to数字4. Beside, the percentage of C increased from 数字5 to 数字6.
       
        　　中间(2种):
       
        　　1 There are several possible factors which account for this phenomenon and the following are the typical ones. On the one hand, ...... On the other hand,......
       
        　　2 Many people propose lots of reasons for this kind of phenomenon. As far as I am concerned, my favor goes to some interesting ones. The followings are the reasons that I am prone to. For one thing,...... For another thing,......
       
        　　结尾(2种)：
       
        　　1 In view of the foregoing, we can easily arrive at the conclusion that this established tendency is acceptable. Postgraduates had better improve their practical skills during postgraduate study in order to get a satisfied job in the future.
       
        　　2 Given the foregoing, we can naturally draw a conclusion: this established status quo is positive and acceptable so that it is unnecessary for the public to regard it with apprehension. Moreover, I am firmly certain that such a trend is to proceed in the decade to come.